The general idea of a great and progressive nation is most times set by various factors such as job opportunities, quality education, military prowess, and excellent health care. The prompt suggests that the greatest indicator of a great nation is the general welfare of its people as opposed to individual achievements. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the prompt for three main reasons.
Firstly, success in a project is due to the collective effort of all key members of that project. Thus, the welfare of the people matters in building a great nation. For instance, there are key figures from Nigeria that partake in making world economy decisions in the likes of Ngozi Okojo- iweala the director general of the world trade organization. However, her sole achievement can not buttress the fact that the Nigerian economy is in dire trait. Thus, it can be seen that the individual progress although may bring prestige to a nation, it does not uplift the nations progress as a whole.
Secondly, the education standards of a great nation must be well rounded, developed and made accessible to everyone in the nation to ensure all round progress of a nation. For instance; the achievements of artists although they add to the prestige of the country is not an indicator of a great nation, For example; the female Nigerian artist Yemi Alade has brought the music industry great prestige by performing at the Earth shot in London alongside other British artists or Burna boy winning a Grammy award for his album twice as tall. This accolades doesn't change the fact that the music industry is not truly supported by the country and most of Nigeria's artist have to get music education outside the country. Thus the fact that two Nigerian musicians have brought great prestige to the country doesn't cover for the discrepancy in music education in the country.
Thirdly, A nation's robust economy may telltale a good standard of living in that nation however this is not the case at every turn. For instance, India is one of the most fast growing nations in education and commerce, contributing greatly to the medical field however these approbations cannot beguile the poor standard of living in the country, the elevated rates of poverty and crime as well. Thus showing that displaying the pleasant aspects of the nation prompted by individual achievements can not mask the other poor aspects of the nation.
In conclusion, Although there countries like Korea that widely promote their artists and individual achievements of their citizens, they also ensure that they pay attention to the welfare of the vast majority thus proving their status as a great nation. Finally, the overall welfare of the people in a `nation stands as the surest indicator of a great nation as opposed to individual acheivemets
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00852878465 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66049555468 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479744136461 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3010335083 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.176470588 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5882352941 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 5.21951772744 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305847101585 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104732523974 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103161048361 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172695067373 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566651585986 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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