The nation can be considered great only when it provides good services and facilities to citizen to ensure either they are happy or not. Only achievements achieve by the rulers, artists or scientists doesn't make the country reputation great or higher in the eye of people, so basically, I agree with the above statement that country can be great-when it consider the people's welfare. As we know that there is a huge achievement achieve by many countries in history; but have we ever thought if they were for the welfare of people or something else. Since, if we looked over the history of many countries' ancestors have always fight with opponent for the good life of their people. Therefore, this statement can be further clarified by following supportive examples.
The happiness of people depends on the different aspects of their life like social, economic, cultural. People have many rights and without being able to use those rights people cannot be happy. For example, the great man Abraham Lincoln-who was the president of United states have made the nation great not only by achieving his goals, but he has done a lot of struggles to end the slavery and created the possibility of social and civil freedom for African Americans. As a result, he works for the welfare of the people and made the nation great by recognizing him as a famous hero who worked for the welfare of people.
Besides these all, a nation is determined by its people. If the political leaders didn't pay attention toward its people and overlooked over their rights; there will be a violence or protest toward government by the citizen because they will not care about their nation dignity because without their happiness and satisfaction, the achievement of political leaders become worthless for them. Hence, along with the achievements if politician leaders and scientists considered the good things for people then only nation can be declared great.
Lastly, it is not true that all scientific invention engenders only beneficial goods. For example, industries, factories and locomotive wastes and smokes pollute the air leading to acid rain, global warming and depletion of ozone layer which have led to serious pollution and degradation of human environment as well as have negative impact on human health: Not only this nowadays, but people also use technology as a weapon for illegal activities, so one should be concerned about the impact of such invention on the users.
Thus, the well-being of a nation is directly related to the well-being and welfare of its people who constitute the nation. The greatness of a nation cannot be determined by a handful of people who have gained popularity and fame because of their achievements in the field of science and technology or politics.
- Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects Others believe it is important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries 58
- Teachers salary should be based on the academic performance of the students 66
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones 66
- The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'considers'?
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Suggestion: fought
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, lastly, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03904555315 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69248169922 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505422993492 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8272727014 60.3974514979 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.1875 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8125 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19790455019 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738601487204 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495762770359 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115568163843 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442367675562 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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