The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The essence of this prompt is that a nation’s true development is measured by the general welfare of its residents and other achievements as well and I stand by it. Usually, when it comes to a nation’s development or when it a nation is accoladed as a great nation, the first thing that anyone thinks about is the nation’s achievements that is the rich history and the contributions of rulers or leaders into making what the nation is today, or discoveries made by venerable scientists. For example, Edward Jenner, a well respected English scientist who precluded the concept of vaccines to the world. He was the one who discovered the vaccine for small pox. In those days small pox was a highly noxious disease, because of which people have suffered the loss of their loved ones, and people couldn’t have imagined a panacea for this pernicious disease until the small pox vaccine was discovered by Edward Jenner. This was one of the greatest accomplishments by Edward Jenner who was from the United States of America.
Rulers and artists sure make the country a great one. For example, we all have heard stories about the great Mughal emperor Akbar, he was a great leader and ruler in Northern parts of India. Shah Jahan another great ruler, known for the love for his wife. He built the Taj Mahal in Agra, India, which is the Symbol of Love and a great historic monument. It is the crown jewel of art in India because of its baroque architecture. So, when someone says India, they immediately remember or connect the nation with its rich history and rulers of the past.
However, a great nation cannot just be about its achievements. what makes a great nation is the welfare of the people as well. for example, let’s take a company say Glaxo Smith Kline(GSK). This company is manufacturer of medicines for various diseases. GSK hasn’t become one of the top pharmaceutical companies only by manufacturing medicines, there is so much more to it. For the company to be a successful one, it has to give a unique solution to a problem, but that’s not the only important part of success of a company. It would also have to have a good working professional environment for the employees, an environment that is secure, free of any kind of discrimination, sexism and violence. If the employees are harassed why would they work for the company? If there no employees, then how will the work be done and how will the company become successful? A nation works in the same way. The company can be thought of smaller version or a model to understand why welfare of people is important for a nation's development and growth.
For example, if a nation has a rich history, great scientific discoveries and artistic inventions, but it is crippled with poverty and a debilitating economy, will it still be called a great nation? It most certainly will not. In simple terms, general welfare is providing protection and provide for those in need. The constitution is built in such a way so that it can meet all these needs. People should be given proper healthcare and security no matter what. The factors like poverty, literacy rate, employment rate, that is general welfare and the country's economic status, all go hand in hand, and plays a key role in marking the successful running of a nation.
In conclusion, it is important that a nation focuses on the welfare of its people rather than just trying to achieve something in other fields like research, and others. The general well-being of the residents of a nation becomes an indispensable element for a nation to be a great one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Line 5, column 1006, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...hy welfare of people is important for a nations development and growth. For example,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2972.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 622.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77813504823 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99398916966 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76719255913 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 215.323595506 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48231511254 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 934.2 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1062431228 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8709677419 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.064516129 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64516129032 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219658650889 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609532881438 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569508692093 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139957168619 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341184544166 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.