Technology solved problem, the ability of a human to think for themselves will not surely deteriorate.
Technology is the collection of different types of techniques. Nowadays, everywhere using technology. Technology affects the people all over the world, both positively or negatively. It depends on how we are using technology. Day by day, use of technology is increasing. I believe that technology solved problem, the ability of a human to think for themselves will not surely deteriorate.
When we have faced the problems that time making efforts to find a solution to it. For example: In history, people travel on long distance journey with heavy loads of luggage. That time people found a solution using technology and resulted in inventions of wheels which made easy and less burdening.
People must ameliorate the environment by ‘Go Green’ project. For example: usually, we took the print out of train or bus or movie ticket. That print out will not be used again and it is wasted. Paper is made from tree woods. Earlier, There are many applications and websites to book a paperless ticket. With the help of this, we save the environment as well as time.
People communicating very easily in the long distance also. My friend and her family both are staying in different countries. Before the invention of technology, people used to write a letter and post it. For that process, it took 4-5 working days. Now, there are many other electronic devices in a market like mobile, laptop, tablet etc. Using the technology, people can apprise to anyone and everywhere.
Technology has revolutionized the healthcare industry. Various diagnostic tools such as blood pressure, glucose measuring machine has made an accurate diagnosis of disease result can start treatment of the patient.
“Science of today is the technology of tomorrow” _Edward teller.
Technology is created from the human mind. Development of technology depends on the advancement of human thinking mentality. Technology solved the problem in short time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2935483871 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94673667367 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1099155555 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.7777777778 118.986275619 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4814814815 23.4991977007 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2962962963 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305797592652 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812808330421 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177112639644 0.0758088955206 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14091698386 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155192838744 0.0667264976115 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 48.8420337079 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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