Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology circles around us nonstop and encroaches on the way we live our everyday lives, whether we like it or not. Society has the choice of rising and meeting technological advancements or slipping back into the past. The copious benefits of technology have improved varies aspects of our lives and, though complicated at times, most individuals have access to learning the ins and outs of technology that are needed in today's world.
Think of all of the medical and industrial advancements in the last 100 years-improved medical devices, safer cars, and more efficient homes. None of these oddities would be here if it weren't for technology. The medical field alone has made leaps of progress, creating things like pacemakers, robotic instruments, and defibrillators. Thus creating faster recovery times and extending life expectancy. Industries have developed food delivery via a mobile device and cars that can drive themselves. Some simple explanations of ways our lives have been simplified. Life as we know it would be completely different if we were void of technology.
Understanding how technology has simplified our lives, it is valid to say that technology can, at times, be confusing. It is for this reason that technology support services exist in all aspects of life, from the field of nursing informatics to community center classes to your local Best Buy Geek Squad. Technology support services exist, if only people utilize them. Futhermore, as technology integrates deeper in our lives, younger generations will become more familiar with devices, as schools adopt technology lessons and generations of tech savvy adults roam.
These generations, and this innovation, is exactly what society needs to continue moving forward, further advancing the medical and industrial industries. These developments are the exact things that will make our lives simpler in the coming years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...are needed in todays world. Think of all of the medical and industrial advancements in ...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...e of these oddities would be here if it werent for technology. The medical field alone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42087542088 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95077843636 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5696446671 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.21951772744 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125261974566 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406950974546 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356909610513 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730309041146 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198942129421 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.