Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology is always evolving. There are times when it has complicated our lives, but more so it has helped us simplify our ever busy lives. While technology can be a little complex, it can help simplify certain aspects of our lives.
One way that it simplifies our lives is the way in which it can expedite research that is done in schools. In the past, students would spend hours researching through books for one answer. Now, it is as easy as using Google to find the answers they need.
Technology can help make it easy for people to connect. If someone is trying to network for their job, they may have had to go to networking events and work harder to catch the attention of their peers. Nowadays, they can simply go on LinkedIn and connect to coworkers on social media; effectively streamlining the process of networking.
A field in which technology has made a tremendous differnece is in Criminology and Public Safety. There was a time in which it was a long and complicated process to prove one's innocence. Due to evolving technology, collecting samples for DNA tests can prove one's innocence and simplify the process. Although, it is important to remember that technology has also helped the other side. Criminals have also learned to use technology to help them avoid getting caught.
To summerize, technology can and has simplified our lives in many ways, but it has also made our world more complicated as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...a long and complicated process to prove ones innocence. Due to evolving technology, ...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...lecting samples for DNA tests can prove ones innocence and simplify the process. Alt...
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Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nes innocence and simplify the process. Although, it is important to remember that techn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 247.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82186234818 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69459280213 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.518807564 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166018957807 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056770810769 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596229728286 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103937296535 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516419302729 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.