Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 19.5258426966 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 42.0 11.3162921348 371% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 77.0 33.0505617978 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3748.0 2235.4752809 168% => OK
No of words: 658.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69604863222 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06473204393 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47210527032 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 215.323595506 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.101823708207 0.4932671777 21% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1001.7 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1037641606 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0714285714286 5.21951772744 1% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0230457513556 0.243740707755 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0125487446033 0.0831039109588 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0139621504277 0.0758088955206 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0176074053013 0.150359130593 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00308482206312 0.0667264976115 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 1.76 8.38706741573 21% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 26.0 100.480337079 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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