Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Despite solving many issues in healthcare and other important areas, technology is raising new concerns thereby questioning their benefit.
To begin with, it is clear that technology is transforming our lives for better or for worse. One may consider smartphones that made people more interconnected than ever before. However, such connectivity comes along with numerous privacy issues. Because technology became such a big part of humanity, the individuals are constantly sharing their information with the world. These data might be breached by hackers to blackmail the users. As such, while strengthening the bonds between people, technology also proves vulnerable to hackers.
Furthermore, frequent interaction with technologies make humans dependent and even worse - addicted to them. Primarily, this is caused by social networks and games that reward its users for playing. Given how vast have electronic devices become, it is no surprise that people all over the world are chatting via smartphone and entertaining themselves through these devices. One can often find people interacting with each other more frequent in virtual domain than in the reality. Hence, there is a growing addiction to technology.
In conclusion, technology are facilitating people's lives. However, this comes at a cost of increased dependence and privacy issues. Therefore, our lives are becoming complicated with the development of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, may, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74178403756 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98758969743 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713615023474 0.4932671777 145% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1455025366 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5333333333 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114008817812 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404540547652 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494522729765 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065291373963 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422292267277 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.42 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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