Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Ideas are struck to those people who have the ability to think and are those who are scintillating in their work. Criticism or doubts are raised to every individual who does best in their life. The person who is in limelight will always be criticized by the fellow individuals and actually, it strengthens persons' legacy to face every circumstance. Life is full of ups and downs. Sometimes you have to travel barefoot on the thrones and sometimes life is so favorable that there is a path of serendipity all over.
Many great individuals who have conquered and were able to engrave their names in the world of history were faced by the criticism and doubts. Galileo Galilei was opposed by the Catholic Church and was castigated from the society declaring as the heretic person. He discovered that the Earth revolves around the sun, while the belief was sun is revolving around the earth. But due to his efforts, he was able to think beyond limits and thus was criticized by people. But he stuck to his principles and later the discovery made by Galileo Galilei was found to be true and was appreciated for the same.
Criticism and doubts are always raised but you have to withstand with it and stand with legacy. This can help people to be strong and be firm in their decision and believe in their ability. The inventor of Facebook, the great messaging application, Mark Zuckerberg, was opposed by many people and was criticized by many he started developing that application. Now you can see that he is holding a billion dollar company. This is because he was not demoralized by the doubts raised by people instead he was strong enough to face them and prove them wrong. He was not influenced by the criticism instead he stuck to his idea and made the remarkable discovery.
In conclusion, ideas that are developed by individuals are exceptional and not understood by common individuals and thus criticize them but if the person discovering it has the faith in his work and stands with legacy can prove everybody wrong by discovering something extraordinary and can withstand to challenges given by the society.
- high school should eliminate their art and music to make room for more extensive studies in mathematics and English. 80
- The best way for a society to prepare its young for the leadership in government, industry or other field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 66
- The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting 53
- As people rely more and more on technology, their ability to think deteriorates 58
- Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy. 58
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83516483516 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71794810087 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475274725275 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7777427334 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.529411765 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167370732117 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643762634179 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785869551828 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105849328575 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778066694773 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.