Those who treat politics and morality as though they were separate realms fail to understand either the one or the other
I partially disagree this opinion. politicians should have a special bottom line morally. After all, political decisions can't have personal emotions, and there's no problem. Even this person may affect his judgment. Governments can become stronger.
First, politics is the basis for the exchange of profits. when he leaves profit, his ethics may be annoying to others. but this is a narrow definition of morality.
Too narrow a morality can mean complete frankness. but don't worry about it, there are things that limit his behavior, namely the law. The president's actions are restricted by the Vice president and Congress. Of course, he should have a bottom line, otherwise he is another Hitler. he should know that he should not kill any ordinary people.
Second, morality has some complex understandings. some ethical conduct in politics is considered wrong, such as dealing with another country. if he agrees to a treaty, he should do it. if he fails, other countries will not trust this country. this is the basic line of morality. As president, when he talks about his ideals when running for president, he strives to achieve that. but if he gets involved in a moral scandal, he may be forced to withdraw from the political platform. some presidents in history have experienced such things. so he should be very careful. These things may make people distrust him. politicians serve this country, and what he does should be good for his country. this is one of the moral principles. but politicians do not suffer because of their feelings, so politicians need limited moral principles.
To sum up, Those who treat politics and morality as though they were separate realms have some reasonable, but there are more mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, after all, of course, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 286.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07342657343 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67196931504 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 23.0359550562 43% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0218331881 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.7407407407 118.986275619 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5925925926 23.4991977007 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.7037037037 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137269946112 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379874852245 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899708439626 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119700012817 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170956853198 0.0667264976115 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 14.1392134831 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.94 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 11.2143820225 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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