On a superficial level, this statement is completely true and I agree to it. But if we think about the statement on
a deeper level, this statement has certain flaws that hinder it from being completely true.
What exactly is true success? When we think of this question the first thought that arises is, it depends on the person, his goals and his aspirations. With this thought, the above statement is proven right. But if we think a little more on this subject, we realize that we also have to take into account whether the end result of that person's goals lead to happiness, that is the true meaning of success. That person might have set goals to be filthy rich in a decade or he/she will have a mansion by the time he turns fifty. But do these goals really give a person true success? according to me, no. These goals are basically a means to an end. Everyone person sub-consciously seeks happiness. He could obtain that happiness through his work, he could obtain it through his family or/and he could obtain it through his hobbies.
But the argument suggesting that the above statement cannot be dismissed based on just defining what true success is to a person. There are external factors, which also influence how successful a person will be in his endeavors. Nowadays monetary matters are also important to be financially independent and also be happy. You might ask how? the answer is due to the rising costs of food and healthcare and social endeavors basically the rising costs of living a person needs
to make sure he has sufficient funds to go through his daily needs such as food, transport, his sanitary needs and so on and so forth. This does not take into account that he will have people such as his parents, his children and his spouse depending on him to provide for them. These also dictate how hard the person has to work to provide for his family. Now we can using this example show that true success for this person will be seeing the happiness of his spouse and children and the proud look on his parents face when they see their child succeed in his/her life.
There are some minority section of people who tie their happiness directly to money. These people will work day and night to earn astronomical amounts of money because it gives them satisfaction.
In conclusion, we can say that on a superficial level the statement, 'True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself' is true but with greater thought we can say that there are certain other factors which also determine what true success means for different people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 33.0505617978 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42616241572 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485838779956 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 73.011380111 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1304347826 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9565217391 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205616987888 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635456849957 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717762331744 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113590795139 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101146475498 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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