I agree with the statement that " true success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself". It rightly states that favorable outcome is the result of the continuous diligent work towards the set objective. I would like to explore this further in the following essay.
First and foremost, one should set goals in life so that he do not gets digress in other things and work towards the aim with perseverance. I would like explain this with the help of example. Many of my school friends joined football team, dance and singing classes also they wanted to excel academically. But neither they performed excellently in academics nor they were good in playing or singing. However, the topper of the class was able to perform exceptional in studies as he was determined about his aim and know where to put his hard work. Thus, it can be said that a person should have objectives so that he can work meticulously towards it.
Besides this, a person must know his predisposition and accordingly target should be set. In this way he can put his heart and soul in order to achieve it. We should not get tempted by others success as it would not be our area of interest. For example, if Messi had tried to be a cricketer then he might not be as successful in his life as he is at present. Additionally, what if Mr. Barack Obama tried to be a footballer? today he might not be a renowned personality. Therefore, we must aim higher according to our penchant in order to work assiduously towards it.
Last but not the least, we all set objectives, while setting higher purpose in life is easy, the journey of working towards it to get the desired end result is tough. One should strive hard to achieve the aim. It may take several attempts to finally get it, but achievement of the goals do not happen overnight, it requires scrupulous efforts. There are many names from history who achieved what they dreamed of. One such example is Thomas Alva Edison, it took him hundreds of attempt to made the bulb correctly. But he was clear about his goal and thereby, found true success.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that I totally agree with the above statement. As the goals are set a person is able to find true success consequently do not work in haphazard manner by getting stuck in irrelevant things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: others'; other's
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62589928058 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63942401421 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532374100719 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0182753172 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.375 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178825862713 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543474650223 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823150072516 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125859438248 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780821926748 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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