True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you ta

Simply saying success is the satisfaction achieved from doing some task that is preset. Success is the rewards that is gained from the laborious effort one has done during his/her life. Success defers from each other perspective. It is just the pleasure that people satisfy with their performance after they achieved something great. the success for one person may or may not be called as success for another person. It depends upon the way in which people appreciate their works or labor in accordance with their expected results.
In real, what is success then? It is the matter of question for every individuals. Actually success is measured from the individuals goals. True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself. the person are likely to gain success if he/she had set his/her goals for his/herself. Without any goals and aims in life, one cannot chase behind something in the search of success. the person should has some vision on which he/she is planning to do something great. Following his/her goals he/she can definitely do something effective to achieve success in his/her task.
If we set our goals and do follow the objectives of that goals then our dedication in that particular field give rise to the various fruitful results. Setting goals and following the path of that activities can lead people in the innovation of various different things that could generate another way of achieving something extraordinary in the field and finally one can meet his/her success. The goals set by the individuals depends upon the level of his/her dedication. Individuals with proper set of goals in his/her life can lead to the path of success in his/her life. Sir Issac Newton, Albert Einstein and similar other great scientists of this world had their own set of goals in their life in their particular field. Their level of dedication finally lead them to be one of the great scientist in the world, which is the best epitome of the true success lead by the proper st of goals.
So it can be concluded that, if the individuals have set their well organized goals in his/her life then definitely one day he/she can gain true success in his/her life despite the any kinds of obstacles he/she faces during the time of his hard work. Randomly organized task and haphazard activities can lead to the path of failure.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ce after they achieved something great. the success for one person may or may not b...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...erms of the goals one sets for oneself. the person are likely to gain success if he...
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Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... goals one sets for oneself. the person are likely to gain success if he/she had se...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ind something in the search of success. the person should has some vision on which ...
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Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...he search of success. the person should has some vision on which he/she is planning...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, if, may, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87313432836 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50219700004 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432835820896 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7958834492 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0454545455 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218903248484 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851918989772 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889520838067 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153675709036 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535734035291 0.0667264976115 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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