I undoubtedly agree, "true success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself", the above mentioned remarkable statement, because of it's application in real life makes a person successful. Every individual should set their main goal relating to the task in which they can perform better, which leads a person to focus on their specific path. The person, without doubt, who is devoted in their fixed objective has been able to produce great result, besides that, who has worked without setting fixed goal produces a mediocre task.
Firstly, a person who has not specified their constant goal gets diverted into many desultory and tawdry actions, which makes that individual unsuccessful. Taking some examples of my school friends, who always want to continue many interest with their study; they wanted to sing, they wanted to dance and they wanted to play every sports but they didn't have set a perfect goal for themselves. As a result, they didn't score good score in exam, in additional, neither they became singer nor player. They are below average in every activity. But our school topper, setting a goal for oneself: to get a excellent academic result, designed a plan to achieve his goal and followed it, who finally achieved his fruitful result.
People, secondly, should ascertain their goal at which they are good at, alongside, with their interest. People often get allured by others success, with tempted by it, they follows the same goal and strategy contradiction to their own interest and their talent. Honestly, they would not get success with copying others goal and others steps to get success; they lively need to realize their own talent and the plan, relating to their talent, which will lead to the key for success. For a paradigm, if Messi would have planned to be a singer and Obama would have set his goal to be a footballer, seriously, where they would be? To be sure, they would not have been known to the public as in the present.
Finally, After people have set their goal, formulate a plan and design which would be best and fast way to reach their expected destiny. Choosing goal is somewhat easy task; the difficult part of their journey is struggle to step to their destiny. Although they may have fixed their goal, they may finally get mediocre result. To reach their destiny successfully, they should work hard rationally; like profound academic study, skill development and research etc. To exemplify, a successful engineer most had studied his course thoroughly, performed his/ her practical and internship meticulously and successfully completed his project and research.
In summary, to be successful individual, a person should be always goal oriented without sticking in the tangential activities. With supplementary, it is true that a person should never set a goal which is not good for them and which is beyond their capability as well as they need to be motivated and enthusiastic to their meaningful goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, honestly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, in summary, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2502.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04435483871 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62276303278 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514112903226 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.327430665 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.1 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192312655887 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720666801284 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628037889902 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140018628319 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574487925913 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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