A true university education encompasses far more than the narrow, specialized study of a single discipline. Only through exploring the broad spectrum of liberal arts courses can students become truly learned.
Education is prerequisite of development. Government of every country is investing more time and effort to enhance education standards of its country. A broad spectrum of courses helps students to decide what to study and know more about different things and learn new things which can be helpful for the daily lifes. So, I agree that a true university education should provide courses in broad fields instead of specialized study in a single discipline.
A university education will give a student not only the knowledge of a certain field but also teaches student the art of living. I, in my university days learned more about the life and people as we as a student spent maximum amount of our day in university studying and exploring life. So, university is the best place to teach student and make them learn about all the things they required in their life.
The course of liberal arts includes history, art, culture, tradition and lifestyles of different current and ancient people of the world. This course allows student to know how people lived in ancient ages even with less facilities and resources and how people are living and complaining in today's world where they have access to whatever they like. Student can truly learn about the varieties of things available in the world when they get chance to explore the broad spectrum of liberal arts.
I am not completely against of the fact that students should not be given any specialized study of a single discipline. Specialization in certain discipline is also equally important otherwise we cannot get doctors specialized in a field of medicine like eye specialist, ontologist, gyanecologist and others. Along with that the engineers like civil engineers, architects, computer engineer, scientists will not be there if there is inavailability of specialized study. It is important but these specialist students also should be given some broad subjects that will help them to know about these things.
The current education system of Nepal is a good example of providing both specialized course and some broad course of study. The students in school level have to study about all the things from art, history, music, dance, physics, math and social studies. But after completing their schooling, they can study a little more specialized course, but even that course include some traces of these broad field. I, even in my undergraduate study of computer engineering have to study subjects like Economics, Physics, Chemistry. These subjects helped me to enhance my knowledge and made me learnt about some things different from my field.
So, I believe specialized study is important but university should offer courses related to broad spectrum that broaden and elaborate the students knowledge and mind, and do not narrow them down to a specific subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13665943601 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73365867254 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46420824295 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7347320118 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.05 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348800026096 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112729853633 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761720844022 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188599596562 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05755951235 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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