"The true value of a civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments."

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ther than scientific accomplishments. According to me, the true value of civilization is the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...well-being of the people in a society or nation. Civilization is an amalgation of...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nation
...-being of the people in a society or nation. Civilization is an amalgation of both ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...s. I am not conveinced with the claim that civilization is more about artistic cre...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 58.6224719101 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 463.0 2235.4752809 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 78.0 442.535393258 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9358974359 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.9718278662 4.55969084622 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76436542784 2.79657885939 135% => OK
Unique words: 49.0 215.323595506 23% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 136.8 704.065955056 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1334498833 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428235500408 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229554892844 0.0831039109588 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143050066315 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258353391501 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899458723307 0.0667264976115 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.1639044944 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 100.480337079 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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