Since the dawn of civilization, artistic creations and scientific accomplishments have gone hand in hand. Early men discovered the use of fire, designed new tools and equipments, learned how to make clothes out of animal skin and leaves along with walls painting, leaving their footprints.
As the years rolled by, humans made have made their way out of Forest, setting itself apart from rest of the species of Animalia, and progressing thereafter. With the passage of time, humans civilization has progressed drastically, which led to the introduction of brand new eras, boasting of brilliant scholars, philosophers and scientists along with scintillating artists, musicians and writers. Each century is filled with its own set of mind-boggling inventions along with rich cultural and diverse ethnicity. Therefore, the statement “The true value of a civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments" is inaccurate.
Renaissance Period experienced the development of a new era of artists, writers, dancers and musicians that is laudable even today in 21st century. Scientific accomplishments, like the discovery of Gravitational pull by Newton, was also made during that era. 20th century world has been through a lot of changes, right from invention of airplanes to computers and World Wars, which has affected both scientifically as well as culturally.
Hence, it can be concluded from the above examples that the demarcation between artistic creation and scientific accomplishments vanishes while justifying the true value of an era. The development and consequently, greatness is decided by both its scientific accomplishments along with artistic creations.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: kotharu2006
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 257.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70428015564 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43394858828 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4576615974 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.272727273 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364471991518 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146405591099 0.0831039109588 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.224054112241 0.0758088955206 296% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20078353 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135063708146 0.0667264976115 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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