“Truly innovative ideas do not arise from groups of people, but from individuals. When groups try to be creative, the member force each other to compromise and, as a result, creative ideas tend to be weakened and made more conventional. Most original ideas arise from individuals working alone.”
In the current technology era, all mankind living in the innovative, progressive and technical world. In this century rapidly increase flaw towards the innovation and automation. Every new innovation mandatory for suffering substances and living life. This innovation comes from innovative ideas which is occurs from human thinking ability and own perspective. Any innovative ideas arise from individuals provides more supportive and satiate implement of own perspective rather than arise from group of people.
When any innovative ideas invoke from group, it may be innovative but some person not able to freely express ideas, views and always to compromise with own thinking and own view point because rest of group member may not have accepted or can understand towards your opinion. Marks Zuckerberg founder of Facebook, Inc. which is biggest social media platform. Makes such type innovative ideas bring from individually and makes largest grossing market in social media. Elon musk CEO of SpaceX because own innovative ideas and ability to sees outer space in different views becomes successful entrepreneur. But in development and build innovative ideas into innovation cooperative work may be better preformation.
Any researches try to implement your ideas and own study from many sources and has a various a forms which are try to convert in innovation. Research always express own knowledge and ideas if put into group many members oppose that or try to manipulate that so it becomes a negligible. Many greatest scientists Albert Einstein, Sir Isaac Newton and Stephen Hawking are express own extraordinary thinking to perform many experiment and aver the worlds people to new concepts, things and provides different vision to sees the world. In groups members most of time never agree with someone’s point and force to stultify things, and create a many loopholes in argument because of that final result of any innovative ideas become convoluted and have no any values. In organization innovative ideas in terms of new product which provide competition to the rest of the companies and established product into market. In this innovative products assembled by team member but it always the innovative ideas and enterprise of the team member or any individual member of the group that makes all difference.
However, team provide creative work and valuable result but the main concepts and thinking behind the success of productive works provides by individual person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...ds the innovation and automation. Every new innovation mandatory for suffering substances and ...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the biggest'.
Suggestion: is the biggest
...kerberg founder of Facebook, Inc. which is biggest social media platform. Makes such type ...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a form' or simply 'forms'?
Suggestion: a form; forms
...udy from many sources and has a various a forms which are try to convert in innovation....
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...or try to manipulate that so it becomes a negligible. Many greatest scientists Albert Einste...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experiment seems to be countable; consider using: 'many experiments'.
Suggestion: many experiments
...s own extraordinary thinking to perform many experiment and aver the worlds people to new conce...
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Line 5, column 751, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...vative ideas become convoluted and have no any values. In organization innovative ...
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Line 5, column 915, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es and established product into market. In this innovative products assembled by t...
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Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve works provides by individual person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39743589744 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79952682205 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.796962852 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.944444444 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38888888889 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305323686316 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952782163443 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813470076204 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174597671328 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080770616808 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.