To understand the most important characteristic of a society, one must study it’s major cities.
To aquire the salient cahracteristic of a place where we live, surveyer has to research on metro cities. I partially agree with the above statement. One has to diagnos major cities as well as villages and towns. They both have different system to follow with clothing, food, politics, entertainment, behaviour, polititians, travelling, peace of mind, etc.
Firstly, As we know that in India each part tells us different stories and condcts diversity in their lifestyles. In addition, they have varities and specialities in their foods paterns. The urban people are aware of world cuisins and some of them are very strict with their salubrious diet. They take protein more in their diet, same applies to their clothes. They wear stylish satorials every day and knows what are the casual, business, formal,etc . However, The villagers rarely knows foreign cuisines. Their eating pattern is conventional. The rastic fellow doesnot know the genre of clothing.
Secondaly, In small towns they have seperate president, who takes major decisions, even that person is the judge for the peoples’ difficuties and fights. While in cities each process has their own department, different officers to take care.
Thirdly, If one has to study only major city, then he has to be very careful with surveys. He can differentiate and distinguish between different religians with subparts of one who has just moved from village or small city and other has to be who has been living in city for several years. Then only surveyer can gan nearly accurate result.
Conclusion is that if one requires accurate survey result he must travel disparate cities, towns, villages of the country. If he is short of time or have any emergency then opt for just major city diagnosis with research on diversity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15807560137 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70823511473 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2403938282 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107449538357 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319292394337 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505014712036 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682270854753 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402083741539 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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