To understand the most important characteristics of a country, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Major cities serves as a hub for infrastructural, economical, legal and various aspects of the country. These cities provide an overview of the country position as they reflect the country demographic, values, culture and where it stands on the development forefront. So, one can study the important characteristics of the country by reading and analyzing about its major cities.
All the business and industries are set up in the major cities. All the major exchange of trade of goods and services happens here and thereby contributing a significant proportion in overall gross domestic product. So by reading about the composition of the good and services that form part of the trade in these cities one can find out which sector i.e primary, secondary and tertiary are pre-dominant in the economic development of the country.
These cities serve as an attraction for the foreign investors as they are the major breeding ground for the business and thus providing home for various multinational companies. So by studying the proportion and percentage of these companies in relation to the national companies, one can know the foreign direct investment and their effect on the country.
These cities provide an ample amount of employment opportunities and thereby attracting the youth from the various other states .They represents a culture from their own state thus showing cultural diversity, own traditional values and customs. By analyzing the employment data from these cities the composition of men and women in the workforce, demographics of the country can be easily studied.
The major cities are the major indicator of the growth of the company in terms of the infrastructural development. The quality of education, facilities in the public hospital and the quality of the roads ,transport facility etc all this indicate the country stance on this aspect.
Thus major cities serves an indicator of the country performance and about its composition and diversity of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3164556962 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98502108959 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487341772152 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1913303566 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116288895997 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524312517985 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493491092274 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645807473321 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461231111329 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.