to understand most important characteristics of a society, one most study the major cities.
Soecity of any state or country is characterized by the culture, tradition, ideology etc. In order to understand these trait deep studying of the state or country is needed. Some argue that studying the major cities would be adequate in order to understand important features of the soceity. I, on the other hand do not not agree to such argument.
To begin with, the study of major city comprise of people from different ethinicity, different society. Major cities are also mostly inclined towards to modern approaches, that might not be case of the whole state or country. So, by studing only major cities one cannot get the complete pictures of the true soceity. For example, Washinton D.C- Every year thousand of people migrate to Washinton in search of jobs, education and better life. we will find all kind restaurants in this city, starting from European to Chinese. So, studying just Washinton to understand the society, will not reflect the true or exact traits or characterstics. Another example, Mumbai - the finance capital of India, is very different the rest of the country because the city is greatly influnced by th western culture, that is not the case of the rest of the country or state.
Secondly, major cities even though contain a large population , but it is less as compared to the whole nation. For instance, Delhi - capital of India will have population around some millions whereas, the population of the whole nation is around 1.2 billions. Hence, by concentrating on the major cities we are neglecting the a major population. More over the soceity of small town and small cities have authentic soceity traits and characteristic as these are untoched by immigrants or influence of there areas. For example, agriculture is very important of indian soceity as the maximum number of people are engaged in these occupation. But by considering only big cities, some might never conclude the importance of agriculture in the soceity. Major cities have no connection with agriculture.
Lastly, some might argue studying small cities and towns may take time, that is indeed true but to get a complete picture its is necessary to study the these areas.
In conclusion, even though major cities can provide illuminate and put some light on the soceity of any state or country, but is not enough to get the accurate and complete image of important characteristcs of any society. So, it is important to consider small towns and cities to understand the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03389830508 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72166238623 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8443010634 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248498863272 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695133626194 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567946299375 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126001193438 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360971587114 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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