To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Major cities play most significant role in defining the characteristics of a society,but it is not always completely true. I partially agree that the characteristics of a society can be understood from the study of its major cities. Full agreement on this opinion is not possible by me major cities are not the only ones which shape the society.
The extent of the influence of the major cities of a society is not completely known. A society comprises of various characters and they can be understood and undermined not only using study of major cities, but also with the help of all other cities. Both rural areas and cities equally shape a society. It is important to initially know what we are seeking for.If time doesn't matter, we can very well go with the detailed and pragmatic approach to determine and understand the society. But, if time matters more than details,then one can continue with the above mentioned approach in the argument.
We don't know the extent to which a city or a rural area is developed. As per my knowledge,there won't be much greater uneven development.Slight changes in the rural and cities don't make a greater difference. But,if the rural is not as equal as to the cities, then the pessimistic views should be considered for better understanding of a society.
For instance,consider the great leader Bhagat Singh, who understood every characteristics of the society he considered. To attain what he desired and successfully attain it,study of everything in the society helped him to major extent. Even consider Che Guevera efforts to undermine the dominant people with the help of public and Cuban government. Practically speaking,consider the father of architecture, who completely studied every landscape and sewer and all other facilities to develop a great sustainable skyscraper which are there long-lasting. That extent of study helped in building long-lasting skyscrapers.From these examples,I have made my point of view clear that sophisticated and pragmatic approach is needed for best results.
Many factors determine the characteristics.Culture,one among them,which differs from city to city and society to society,is one of the important characteristic.The importance of any particular character can be influenced by culture. A special material used in a building construction,new laws imposed,curfew in a certain area,place of arousal of problems,amateur workers,innocent people,money minded businessmen, low fee doctor, good healing and curing hospitals, all infrastructure universities, well educated citizens,etc. List goes on and everything is not associated or can't be ascribed to a particular city.
Society is something equally shared by everyone and everything.So, only considering particular major cities,won't completely give the desired result.According to me,pragmatic study is needed and so I partially agree to the statement posed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2458.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51121076233 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66143429107 2.79657885939 131% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526905829596 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3382962968 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208438706188 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673578647212 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429091884324 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113956011701 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05178973365 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.