To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Nowadays, everyone is moving to cities from villages for various reasons such as for good career opportunities, for living and working purpose and many more. So globalization has occured a lot over a last few years. So, if one wants to understand the characteristics of a society at present time, he/she can not simply rely on studying of society's cities. Rather, villages are those places where old culture and traditions are still relatively preserved. So, by only visiting big cities and determine the characteristics of society is not the proper way to truly understand everything about society.

Over the time, due to technological advancements and development in every field, big cities such as New York, London, Paris which are cities of developed country's and Bombay, Bengaluru which are of developing country like India have progressed a lot. Owing to this, these cities have the amalgamation of people from different areas of the world. For instance, today New York is called cosmopolitan city because different origins of people like Indians, Chineses, Japaneses are coming to New York every year to study, work, and to settle over there. So, one can not give judgements for characteristics of a society of New York. Even Paris is a hub of fashion, so designers from all over the world having different origins come to live there. So, it will give misleading results if cities are only considered.

Secondly, even today, 70 percent of people in India live in rural areas. Country-sides are those places where characteristics of society is not diluted. Therefore, villages plays an important roles in determining the genuine things about societies. Because, globalization has not taken its place much in villages as compared to cities.

In conclusion, on account of great development worldwide, cities can not be taken into account to understand the characteristics of any civilization, it is the villages that are without any doubt will give true insights about the characterisics of a society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26548672566 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09845183206 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0020760886 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147632161434 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565841884055 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936387085463 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133105291306 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139151929035 0.0667264976115 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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