To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
When thinking about a country, one can’t help but think about the capital and other big cities. This is because these cities have wider diversity and larger population sizes, making them more prominent and relevant. A country’s major cities are therefore, a clear reflection of the most important characteristics of a society.
Big cities are melting pots of culture and people. When you study them, you’re able to asses a wider and more diverse sample size. When trying to understand important characteristics of the United States for example, you should focus on New York City, Washington D.C. and San Francisco. These cities have people from all over the country and due to their size and affluence, they have a greater impact on society as a whole. The most important characteristics, are also determined by the most influential people. The majority of the most influential people in a society tend to live in major cities. In most countries, politicians tend to live and work in the capital. This means that the government which encompasses elected officials from all over the country functions in one space. Major cities clearly represent the country’s most significant qualities.
Small rural populations may be neglected when only taking into consideration major cities. Even though the big cities are melting pots, they don’t generally posses significant representations of secluded rural populations. This can create a misguided or partial understanding of society. In Ecuador for example, there are small indigenous tribes which are secluded in the amazon. When only thinking about the capital, Quito and the other big cities, you neglect such an important part of the country’s value and history.
In order to understand a society, you can focus your learning on its major cities. It is a practical way that covers the majority of the population in focused target sample sizes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33114754098 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01590516362 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.142297697 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5789473684 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255201996676 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080766141935 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072480921408 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161862152529 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507507510481 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.