The megacities of the many countries have now become the home to new migrants from other cities or countries. Few years ago this statement would have proved itself correct that is by just knowing the megacities of the society we could have understood the lifestyle, culture, religion , language , food etc. But due to rapid urbanisation and civilization people have started to move out of their native places. This scenario has now become common. I disagree to the above statement that only by knowing the megacities of the society we characterise it and I support my opinion with the following few reasons:
The megacities have now become home for the people of different basis , the people flee from their native places to these metropolitan cities in search of better life which may include better lifestyle which automatically comes from better earnings. Now a days there are plenty of opportunities for the talented as well as skilful people. There are so many other facilities also by which people get attracted towards these huge cities like good education , better medical facilities, better transport and moreover their talents are recognised and encouraged to pursue them. In amidst of all these chaos the nativity of that particular place is getting lost or is being erased from the society , as the natives may move out of the city or there may be some changes that is being brought into the society due to modernisation. In the earlier days people used to travel less and had very few facilities to travel that is the people had lesser modes of transportation.
But now a days due to advancement in the transportation system people can travel from one part of the world to any other part without much difficulty. The students tend to move to some other countries or cities to pursue higher education were they may get exposed to some new lifestyle , culture, language which may fascinate them and they may follow it also after going back to their home country. For example the city name Bengaluru in the state of Karnataka in India is supposed to be known to be the silicon valley of India and is also known as garden city of the country have now become the roof for many people who have come from various parts of India or from any part of the world. Due to rapid increase in the employment opportunities in the city , the city has been calling out people. Earlier in Bengaluru we used to find the Kannadigas ( the people of Karnataka ) but now we are easily able to find the people from adjacent states like Tamilnadu ,Kerala , Andhra Pradhesh , Telengana ( the southern states of India ) thus the example of Bengaluru may be the best way to showcase that it has become very difficult to find only natives of that particular region but also the people from different part of the world. Bengalurians ( the citizens of Bengaluru ) celebrate Diwali and also the Halloween which shows that new culture is being part of the city and the main advantage is that we get to know the different forms celebrations not only from our country or area but also from other places.
The only disadvantage of the mixture of cultures is that the natives may get fascinated towards the new festivities or celebrations and thus may neglect or show less interest to the old rituals or practices.The migration of the people has led to mixture of cultures , language , food style making the society more diversified and more attractive. It may not be possible to find the characteristic of that particular region in humungous cities but the culture has been retained in the villages or towns in that particular region. As people only move to the cities but the ratio of people moving to villages or countryside is not same hence these regions have retained their essence of beautiful culture that was earlier. To analyse the pattern of lifestyle or living in that particular area countryside would be the best way for observation than any important city of that particular province.
Thus some part of the country may still follow the practices or lifestyle that was being followed in the past ,and these people or group now constitute to be the minorities when in comparison to the other groups who do not follow the same leading to change the appearance of the region both internally and externally. Hence major cities should not be used as a parameter to understand the characteristics of that particular society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 14.8657303371 229% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 58.6224719101 184% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3651.0 2235.4752809 163% => OK
No of words: 752.0 442.535393258 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85505319149 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.23666099739 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6962081838 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.385638297872 0.4932671777 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1190.7 704.065955056 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.900363049 60.3974514979 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.857142857 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8095238095 23.4991977007 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0509377344895 0.243740707755 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0201468128264 0.0831039109588 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290108954419 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.034090343365 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00967731273602 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.1392134831 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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