To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
<div style="font-size: medium; white-space: normal;"><div class="node__content"><p>The megacities of the many countries have now become the home to new migrants from other cities or countries. Few years ago this statement would have proved itself correct that is by just knowing the megacities of the society we could have understood the lifestyle, culture, religion , language , food etc. But due to rapid urbanisation and civilization people have started to move out of their native places. This scenario has now become common. I disagree to the above statement that only by knowing the megacities of the society we characterise it and I support my opinion with the following few reasons:</p><p>The megacities have now become home for the people of different basis , the people flee from their native places to these metropolitan cities in search of better life which may include better lifestyle which automatically comes from better earnings. Now a days there are plenty of opportunities for the talented as well as skilful people. There are so many other facilities also by which people get attracted towards these huge cities like good education , better medical facilities, better transport and moreover their talents are recognised and encouraged to pursue them. In amidst of all these chaos the nativity of that particular place is getting lost or is being erased from the society , as the natives may move out of the city or there may be some changes that is being brought into the society due to modernisation. In the earlier days people used to travel less and had very few facilities to travel that is the people had lesser modes of transportation.</p><p>But now a days due to advancement in the transportation system people can travel from one part of the world to any other part without much difficulty. The students tend to move to some other countries or cities to pursue higher education were they may get exposed to some new lifestyle , culture, language which may fascinate them and they may follow it also after going back to their home country. For example the city name Bengaluru in the state of Karnataka in India is supposed to be known to be the silicon valley of India and is also known as garden city of the country have now become the roof for many people who have come from various parts of India or from any part of the world. Due to rapid increase in the employment opportunities in the city , the city has been calling out people. Earlier in Bengaluru we used to find the Kannadigas ( the people of Karnataka ) but now we are easily able to find the people from adjacent states like Tamilnadu ,Kerala , Andhra Pradhesh , Telengana ( the southern states of India ) thus the example of Bengaluru may be the best way to showcase that it has become very difficult to find only natives of that particular region but also the people from different part of the world. Bengalurians ( the citizens of Bengaluru ) celebrate Diwali and also the Halloween which shows that new culture is being part of the city and the main advantage is that we get to know the different forms celebrations not only from our country or area but also from other places.</p><p>The only disadvantage of the mixture of cultures is that the natives may get fascinated towards the new festivities or celebrations and thus may neglect or show less interest to the old rituals or practices.The migration of the people has led to mixture of cultures , language , food style making the society more diversified and more attractive. It may not be possible to find the characteristic of that particular region in humungous cities but the culture has been retained in the villages or towns in that particular region. As people only move to the cities but the ratio of people moving to villages or countryside is not same hence these regions have retained their essence of beautiful culture that was earlier. To analyse the pattern of lifestyle or living in that particular area countryside would be the best way for observation than any important city of that particular province.</p><p>Thus some part of the country may still follow the practices or lifestyle that was being followed in the past ,and these people or group now constitute to be the minorities when in comparison to the other groups who do not follow the same leading to change the appearance of the region both internally and externally. Hence major cities should not be used as a parameter to understand the characteristics of that particular society.</p></div></div><div style="font-size: medium; white-space: normal; padding: 10px 0px; width: 986px; min-width: 125px; height: auto !important;"><ins class="adsbygoogle" data-ad-client="ca-pub-0840098069707635" data-ad-slot="1869373621" data-ad-format="auto" data-adsbygoogle-status="done" data-overlap-observer-io="false" style="display: block; height: 0px;"><ins id="aswift_2_expand" style="display: inline-table; border: none; height: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; position: relative; visibility: visible; width: 986px; background-color: transparent;"><ins id="aswift_2_anchor" style="display: block; border: none; height: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; position: relative; visibility: visible; width: 986px; background-color: transparent; overflow: hidden; opacity: 0;"><iframe width="986" height="280" frameborder="0" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" allowtransparency="true" scrolling="no" allowfullscreen="true" id="aswift_2" name="aswift_2" style="left: 0px; position: absolute; top: 0px; border-width: 0px; border-style: initial; width: 986px; height: 280px; overflow: visible;"></iframe></ins></ins></ins></div>
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- Although innovations such as video, computers, and the Internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students, these technologies all too often distract from real learning. 33
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities 50
- one should only consider the positive points and ignore the negative ones 50
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. 58
- one should only consider the positive points and ignore the negative ones 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 14.8657303371 229% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 58.6224719101 184% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5060.0 2235.4752809 226% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 847.0 442.535393258 191% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97402597403 5.05705443957 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.39474414794 4.55969084622 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.44749771311 2.79657885939 195% => OK
Unique words: 354.0 215.323595506 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417945690673 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1511.1 704.065955056 215% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 322.512096625 60.3974514979 534% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.111111111 118.986275619 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0555555556 23.4991977007 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0520891390261 0.243740707755 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251555056883 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246581575021 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520891390261 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 14.1392134831 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 48.8420337079 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.23 12.1639044944 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 191.0 100.480337079 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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