A society is a union of different people having a different caste, religion, culture as well as different lifestyle. Society evolves through some changes made by its constituent elements. The issue of learning the characteristics of a city through analyzing its major cities is a contentious one. I believe that to get a better insight into a society one must have to study its different cities, not particularly major cities.While it's logical to study large cities as there is a large population density but it's not suitable to ignore small towns, cities, villages which are also part of society.
Due to Urbanization, major cities have undergone a lot of changes throughout the decade. A lot of people live there as major cities provide an innumerous amount of facilities in comparison with other cities. In a word, major cities are the visible characteristics of a society. Normally, they are the financial, social, capital cities of a country. When we are trying to get a superficial understanding of a society, it is the city that provides us a view of fast-paced, ever-changing social, financial, political, technological or all spheres of life, which is situated in major cities. However, to gain a deeper understanding of a society or rather relatively the permanent aspects of the society one must have to learn also it's minor towns, villages. For instance, if I consider the situation of my country, Bangladesh, where Dhaka is treated as the prime city as well as the capital city. In Dhaka, 40% of people of our total population lives here. Life in a metropolitan is quite different from other areas. Dhaka, a city full of noise, traffic jams, overcrowded, so clearly it will misrepresent the social characteristics of Bangladesh where the other good characteristics are ignored.
Besides, to cope with the modern world, people living here in major cities sometimes defying their traditions, cultures. In a cosmopolitan society where different types of people, different country's people reside temporarily or permanently which will replace that particular society's lifestyle, culture, tradition. On the contrary, the minor cities, villages, small towns are comparatively less susceptible to globalization. The effect of globalization is not severe there. As a result, still, people tend to follow their traditions, disciplines, heritage which was practiced or address by their predecessors. For example, in Indromohon sweets, a most well known and ancient sweet shop situated in Khulna, where still the practise of serving foods in traditional methods is going on and this practice is going on since its inauguration in 1920.
To recapitulate, a major city never reflects all the aspects of society, while it might introduce some revolutionary changes in society. But to get a better insight into the characteristics of a society as well as its tradition, heritage one must need to study other small towns, villages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2468.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26226012793 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18335530268 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496801705757 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0546641549 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3181818182 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17808400568 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051942830046 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048351053866 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122028763362 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289385146706 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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