wkqhlhewqlkhqwlkhewqlhqwelkhklqwehklgfewjkfbmnb efwmnvfemefwvmnvfek4gv r jvrwkqjv jkrq
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wkqhlhewqlkhqwlkhewqlhqwelkhklqwehklgfewjkfbmnb
wkqhlhewqlkhqwlkhewqlhqwelkhklqwehklgfewjkfbmnb efwmnvfemefwvmnvfek4gv r jvrwkqjv jkrq
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 19.5258426966 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 14.8657303371 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 33.0505617978 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 58.6224719101 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 82.0 2235.4752809 4% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 5.0 442.535393258 1% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 16.4 5.05705443957 324% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 1.49534878122 4.55969084622 33% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 16.9068033643 2.79657885939 605% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 5.0 215.323595506 2% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.4932671777 203% => OK
syllable_count: 8.1 704.065955056 1% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 5.0 23.0359550562 22% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 5.0 23.4991977007 21% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.21951772744 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 58.3 14.1392134831 412% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.4 48.8420337079 136% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 12.1743820225 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 73.4 12.1639044944 603% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 2.0 100.480337079 2% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.8971910112 29% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.0 11.2143820225 36% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 11.7820224719 34% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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