With the development of human society, cities have become a hub for economy, politics and culture. Studying major cities is imperative for us to understand a society. However, that is not the whole story. We should always bear in mind it is in the countryside that most civilization originated, the study of which can absolutely be a valuable perspective in understanding a society.
Foremost, cities are centers for major political, economic and cultural events in a society. This is especially true in developed countries, where a large proportion of population live in cities. By studying the many aspect of people\'s city life, one can attain a wealth of information regarding to a particular society. Let\'s consider New York city as an example. The city of New York is a place where influential politicians and business man gather, where the latest scientific discoveries are made and products invented, where the Fashion Week and galleries represent the most pioneering ideas of art. A through study of New York can definitely reveal the most important characteristics of U.S. society, like its creativeness, openness and diversity.
In addition, the development of cities also provide a record of the development of society. It is well-acknowledged that cities are the fruit of Industrial Revolutions. Therefore, by studying the birth and growth of cities, one can track the progress of population migration, economic growth, industrialization and the concomitant changes in people\'s thoughts, beliefs and attitudes. These stories are indispensible in understanding the modern society, and studing cities become even more valuable with this historic perspective.
Nonetheless, cities sometimes do not present the whole picture of a society, making it far from enough to study major cities alone. In less developed countries, for instance, people's living in the countryside may better represent the general standard of living. Likewise, the wilderness on African continent is crucial in understanding a society\'s cultural identity, which is scarce in cities. What is more, many traditional art and customs give their way to modern life style in cities, but they can still be observed in rural areas. Villages are a historic book of a society, which also provides much information necessary for understanding it.
In conclusion, cities and villages present diaparate aspects of a society, and studying one of the two alone can only lead to biased conclusions. In more developed socities, it might make sense to focusing on major cities, while in poorer societies villages and countrysides are definitely more informatics. Importantly, in any society, both cities and villages are a inseperable part of society, thus cannot be negated when studing a society,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ulation live in cities. By studying the many aspect of people\s city life, one can attain a...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: THROUGH_THOROUGH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thorough' (accurate, exhaustive)?
Suggestion: thorough
...ent the most pioneering ideas of art. A through study of New York can definitely reveal...
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Line 9, column 367, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y society, both cities and villages are a inseperable part of society, thus canno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43619489559 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18689297619 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519721577726 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.740449438202 540% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9503014063 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190133687643 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632634367467 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05067864937 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12219520227 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414748959762 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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