to understand the most important characterstics of the society ,one must understand its major city.
The given topic is highly devised,for different people may have divergent opinion on the given topic. some may stand for the topic while other discoundinance it. in my opinion, i strongly agree with the given topic.in order to understand the important characterstics of the society one should have in-depth knowledge of the major city.
generally, a country or nation consist of major and minor cities.most of the minor cities are basically based on agriculture or some kind of farming.let us take an example of Nepal,as we know that kathmandu is the major city,major portiom of these area are well developed and highly sophisticated whereas few portion of these are used for farming and agriculture.it does means that if we did a research on the major city we could understand the important characterstics of the society.
also,most of the government heads are in the major city.in order to understand how the nation or country is organised we could do survey in major city.for example, The president and political leaders are the one who run the nation, thus they have great knowledge of the society or nation.if we understand or did research on them,how they work or how they organize the nation.we could understand the important characterstics of the nation.
apart from farming,most of the people work in the major city.many of the schools,colleges and universities are in the major city.if we want to understand the intelluctual output of the society we could easily understand the important characterstics of the society.
many might argue that,to understand the important characterstics of society one should understand its minor city as well.while it is impossible to definitely disprove this assertion and it may be true that minor cities also have important characterstics however,most of the people of minor cities are also in major city in order to or have some knowledge .thus,if we understand the major city we could understand the most important characterstics of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, thus, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20186335404 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15387464446 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444099378882 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.887594104 60.3974514979 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.285714286 118.986275619 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 23.4991977007 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 5.21951772744 282% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482589719833 0.243740707755 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247225684623 0.0831039109588 297% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151629994663 0.0758088955206 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307552075555 0.150359130593 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815921450261 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 14.1392134831 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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