the given topic is highly devised, for different people may have divergent opinion on the given topic some may stand for the topic while other discoundinance it. i agree with given topic to a great extent.in order to understand the important characterstics of the society,one should have in-depth knowledge of the major cities.however,the rural background also influence the characterstics of the society to some extent.
most of the country have wide range of population in the major cities,for of urbanization and development taken at faster pace.a society consist of different kind of people .all great civilization had a prosper society.if we took a research in a group of people we can understand the important characterstics of the society.
all the government officials,the head of the nation and major industries also considering the education sector most of the colleges,school,university lies on the city area.in order to understand how these are operated and how these impacts the nation one should understand the major city.
to some extent rural background had great influence on the characterstics of the society.many society have been agricultural and the people on cities rely on these agriculture.in order to understand the custom,rituals of the society one should understand the rural area.
thus,in order to undestand the most important characterstics of the society one should understand both of its major cities and rural area.although rural area has few characterstics which cannot be ignored but to great extent if we did the research on the major cities we could understand the important characterstics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he topic while other discoundinance it. i agree with given topic to a great exten...
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...erstics of the society to some extent. most of the country have wide range of popul...
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...iety consist of different kind of people .all great civilization had a prosper soc...
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...e society. all the government officials,the head of the nation and major industries...
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...he education sector most of the colleges,school,university lies on the city area.in ord...
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...ce on the characterstics of the society.many society have been agricultural and the people o...
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...ulture.in order to understand the custom,rituals of the society one should understand th...
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...w characterstics which cannot be ignored but to great extent if we did the resear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 253.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45059288538 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56951792718 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462450592885 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1122803889 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 229.833333333 118.986275619 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.1666666667 23.4991977007 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.21951772744 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429306452621 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223285601819 0.0831039109588 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101646411916 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244751513631 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530271129785 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 14.1392134831 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 48.8420337079 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.