Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study.
Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study. I totally agree to issue and suggest the universities to implement different fields of study to all the students studying in the university.In the contrast there may be many issues arising but implementing this will acquire a student to have knowledge of each and every field.
Firstly the students will get different variations during their particular semester.Students will get to cover knowledge about each and every field prevailing in the university. Taking different courses will enable their strength of learning and vast references of the other courses.
This will reject the idea that the students of the particular university are not knowing the courses of their colleagues and friends studying in the different field.For example , the psychology student will only know about the course he/she is studying but he will not be able to know about
the courses of sociology and might not able to develop the ethics or the knowledge of the social environment. Students pursuing engineering will not be able to know about what is happening of the economic development of the country.Students pursuing doctery will not be more linguist in nature.
Each and every student should be develop more in an expanding way rather than the conservative way.He /she might not be seen dump about asking the questions relating to the different fields of study.This also increases job employment and decreasing the unemployment rate in the country.More and more students will be able to pursue different jobs might not be reliaing on his/her field of study. He /she must have a foreseen knowledge before applying for the course .He/she might not be successful in a particular field but get successful in the other course which might help him/her in their monetary life.For example if person studio the course information technology and is unplowed for 1 year after his graduation he/she might get job relating to the mechanics or the machines which was the course he/she studied during their career.
In a contrasting way the statements that might arouse that will the person be able to acquire a full knowledge pertaining to his /her field?Their may a time that he/she might not able to get master in any one course taken.Person will not be able to get jobs accordingly as he/she has acquired knowledge from may courses but might have been able to master it and that job might require the people whom have mastered that course.The person may flight towards the fall of his /her career .The new course or the adjoining course taken might be a burden to some of the students and he/she may be continuously failing in that subject.He /she not getting the good grades for the courses outside their field of study.This might get into a rare case.
On the sum i will like to agree on the statement and the university are urged to commend the act that every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study and might not think about the failure pertaining the the courses that are outside their field of study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 34.0 12.4196629213 274% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2628.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00571428571 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78128760255 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398095238095 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.695265401 60.3974514979 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.8 118.986275619 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.5 23.4991977007 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362102039443 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253596025939 0.0831039109588 305% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.281846430412 0.0758088955206 372% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25604875056 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199357171348 0.0667264976115 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 14.1392134831 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 48.8420337079 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.7820224719 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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