"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that
it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
According to the speaker video camera provides accurate and convincing record of contemporary life and has become more crucial form of documentation than written records. but i do not agree with the given assertion. written records have always been practiced from long ago and still in wide practice. I think that it is exacting to replace written form of documentation by any other techniques.
written document are practiced all most in every sectors like in medical, business, social etc. it is the best way of keeping records practiced till date. written documents provides actual record of data as per needed. For instance, during election numbers of the voters are recorded in the form of written data. also for any concerts of superstar number of the tickets scold are recorded. Our appointments with the doctors are also recorded and we are informed as per the record.
In banking if we have to evaluate cash inflow and cash outflow of the month, then written record of cash in and out in the given month is most which may be recorded in computer or in any record book but now a day data are recorded in the digitalized form. Earlier before access of technology to most part of the world people practiced keeping records in register, but, later register were replaced by the computers, however, record keeping is still practiced because it has been able to provide accurate and more important record of contemporary life.
Moreover video recording is one of the practices of recording the events in today's society. video recording provides all most every information of the events. we get to know things happening in different parts of world through social media, thanks to social media. video recordings are quite realistic and can impact the viewers in great way. For examples, when devastating earthquake hit Nepal, news were circulated throughout the world but the actual on field conditions were not know to the people until and unless videos of actual destruction were out. videos clips showed the real situation or circumstances of Nepal at that point of time. Although video recordings seem more accurate it cannot be practiced in all cases especially where there is no access to technology.
Eventually, it can be concluded that written records are accurate and more convincing than video recording.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
... of documentation than written records. but i do not agree with the given assertion...
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... documentation by any other techniques. written document are practiced all most ...
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...e recorded in the form of written data. also for any concerts of superstar number of...
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...stances of Nepal at that point of time. Although video recordings seem more accurate it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, for example, for instance, i think, in all cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06510416667 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67647402072 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526041666667 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.5431918661 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326394532957 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11096504939 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124473395056 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224368690323 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957632458064 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.