The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
In the current technological world, everyone wants to capture the each moments of his or her life. Advancement of science has provided us several electronic means such as mobile phones, drones, and other video recording devices to record our life. The prompt presented a controversial issues of whether cameras recording provide us most important form of documentations in comparision with written records. Indisputably, written records have enlightened numerous history events and we still refer several written records for reference. Nevertheless, the present technology give us more accurate and lively forms records. Thus, I generally agree with the opinion that video cameras recordings are better to preserve contemporary life moments compare to written docs.
First of all, video camera provide use several benefits. A person can records his or her whole day, whole month even whole years life experience in a single disk. All instances would be so accurate and convincing that reader or viewer may feel as he or she is experiencing the same moments as shown by characters in recording. On the other hand, written documents increases its size as we store more informations in them. Climate or time affects more to papers than plastic disk containing recordings. For iinstance, time capsule containing several information about human, earth is also made in form of electronic recordings.
Secondly, visual screens provide us most accurate from of live experience than written docs does. For example, when we watch movie in a theatre, we feel like we are living the story of actor in film. We totally indulged and incaptivated in the dramatic scenes of movies. However, when we read written docs, we may not find ourselves same indulgence as we find in movies. A scene which can not be described in written docs can easily be presented through visual screens. We may take example of indirect reference or hints by actors. By reading written docs may not give us same experience of indirect as we get from videos.
Finally, formation of video recording is way easier than writing of docs. For writing, we need papers / clothes, pen and a convenient place where it can be placed safely so that it may not get affected by adverse environment conditions. But when we talk about video recordings, we do not need to give such afforts to record anything.We only need a physical devices to record events and any laymen can record very accurately. He or she does not need to learn language to record any events.
In sum, Although our history or our incestors has learned so much from written materials whether we call it religious, literateraly or historical, we need to change ourselves according to technology. Video recording provides us immense advantages when we camera it to written docs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'issue'?
Suggestion: issue
...e. The prompt presented a controversial issues of whether cameras recording provide us...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'record'
Suggestion: record
...vide use several benefits. A person can records his or her whole day, whole month even ...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...r her whole day, whole month even whole years life experience in a single disk. All i...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
... For iinstance, time capsule containing several information about human, earth is also made in form...
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Line 9, column 334, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...to give such afforts to record anything.We only need a physical devices to record ...
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Line 9, column 358, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'device'?
Suggestion: device
...record anything.We only need a physical devices to record events and any laymen can rec...
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Line 9, column 490, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to learn language to record any events. In sum, Although our history or our ince...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14442013129 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82444067938 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531728665208 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5445268021 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.04 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347276042023 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102059992117 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895969440739 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203348279423 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126678964058 0.0667264976115 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.