The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records

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The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'issue'?
Suggestion: issue
...e. The prompt presented a controversial issues of whether cameras recording provide us...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'record'
Suggestion: record
...vide use several benefits. A person can records his or her whole day, whole month even ...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...r her whole day, whole month even whole years life experience in a single disk. All i...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
... For iinstance, time capsule containing several information about human, earth is also made in form...
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Line 9, column 334, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...to give such afforts to record anything.We only need a physical devices to record ...
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Line 9, column 358, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'device'?
Suggestion: device
...record anything.We only need a physical devices to record events and any laymen can rec...
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Line 9, column 490, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to learn language to record any events. In sum, Although our history or our ince...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14442013129 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82444067938 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531728665208 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5445268021 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.04 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347276042023 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102059992117 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895969440739 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203348279423 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126678964058 0.0667264976115 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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