We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes.
This world has seen from time to time again that If there are no conflicts or struggles then there is no progress, either be it with a peron or be it a society. Learning and adapting in the ever changing globalaized world has become the core essence of survival, this in fact what puts us on top of the food chain. I strongly agree that only during our stuggles and limitations we as humans make progress by learning our most valuable lessons, the bellow two points attempts to outline why.
Human beings are an emotional bunch with a diaspera of feelings that have been developed in the course of our evolution; most of these feelings can in fact be attributed to our survival thus far. The keen sense of what struggle is was first observed by our ancestors before the stone age. Time when we hardly wore any clothes and ate anything and everything we found around us. Although, this bounty of food and water was all thats required for a naive being back then, it soon came to understand the deleterious effects of the long gruesome winters. Humans had to to something about this to survive this harsh inclement climate. That's when man made fire was born -- a savior for not just the generation that discovered it but for millions to come after. This is a prime example rooted deep within us to show how we thrive when we are challenged.
Furthermore, the success of a person can be morally blinding and it can also entice people in taking up pugnacious actions, due to its addictive nature. Not too long ago there was slavery was a common thing is America, white people 'owning' colored people; as abysmal and harsh it might sound today, this was a common thing back then and was even a mark of statesmen ship and opulence. The successful sugarcane plantation owners were nonchalant to the harsh conditions their slaves were put through, as the owners were making large amounts of profits with almost no cost of labour. These repressed people finally became courageous enough to standup to their 'masters' and reject the fetters enslaving them and their freedom for ages. They instigated a revolt against slavery, against how women and children were treated; all this because they struggled, they struggled hard and fought long just to teach a valuable lesson to their masters. The struggles one person goes through due to his limitations, can be a valuable and imporatant lesson to another.
There is nothing wrong in wanting success, one can argue that success gives us a sense of satisfaction and no doubt it does. However, success can make you week, it can make you ignorant and it can also make you impertinent. Struggling through one's limitations and trying to break through the shell will make one strong and sensitive to the world around him, although a sense of 'success' is what the struggle is for. It's about the path you take and not the destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 501.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72255489022 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4856247711 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548902195609 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9335738288 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.3 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.05 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182197027324 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512736753637 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723676169337 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116678870738 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859546767909 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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