People grow through all kinds of experiences, some are encouraging and erratic, some are frustrating and disappointing. The argument above asserts that struggling with our limitations is more conducive to us, compared to enjoying successful moments. I do agree with this idea generally, but this perspective also needs a few qualifications.
We can learn from our struggle in terms of myriad aspects. Confronting annoying things makes you more determined and calm in future challenges, struggling against some of your bad habits polishes your volition, dealing with failure strengthens your capability of behaving yourself in a bad situation. Struggles are thus valuable due to these unusual experiences which make you stronger and more ready to succeed.
Some people would present an opposite opinion by saying that enjoying our success also have a lot of benefits. It is true that there are things that only such success can bring, like fortune, fame, self-confidence and social respect. These things can be constructive when you take them humbly, however, most times, such a rewarding outcome would take people aimless and lost. This causes calamities. Bill Clinton, such an effective president, leading America to such a long period of economic expansion in the peacetime, should have learned a lot through his successful presidency according to the argument above. What consequently is found out is a series of sexual misconduct which has a negative effect on 2016 election decades afterward. People now still blame his power abuse and extramarital relationship in the scandal.
To sum up, enjoying our successes is an actually delightful experience, with some kind of lesson that we can learn from. But they are sometimes outdated, or even worse make people overconfident and take their success as a grant. On the other hand, struggling with our limitations is invaluable though not many people really want to undertake. It does teach people things and make him a better himself.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, however, if, really, so, still, then, thus, kind of, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36507936508 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93935683341 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631746031746 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4310142396 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4117647059 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261115125494 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790964939677 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859422674939 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166095807974 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690051594595 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.