The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
The author claims that for the betterment of a society, the members of society must question the authority. This might sound interesting to try but we need to look into different aspects, in which particular situations the authority needs to be questioned and when not before we reach any conclusion.
The well being of a society depends on various factors some of which includes job opportunities, mitigating poverty, proper healthcare facilities, healthy and hygienic living environment, management of transportation.
Society consists of different kinds of individuals, we are also a part of society.
Questioning is done when we are not satisfied or we need some changes in present situation. First, the society should question the authority if it is not performing its duties in a properly manner. For example, if in a city, where the municipal corporation has the responsibilities of city overall development wherein comes water management, sewage management, traffic management, safety of citizens etc. If the authority is well managing its duties and responsibilities, there stands no point in questioning the authority. Rather, we must appreciate the efforts made by authority. If we criticize or question them on their good work, they might get discouraged and the result would not be as expected.
The different forms of authority starts from our parents, the school we study at, the place we work and ruling government which takes care of overall well-being and development. For example an employee can question a manager about unfair salaries per task. If there is huge degree of corruption in government, we need to question it so as to uproot corruption. If we glance through the history, we have seen many examples that show us that questioning the authority has led to a positive outcome. The example of great Mahatma Gandhi, if he would have not questioned the British authority, we would today be devoid of our demands and Independence. His questioning the British government on points of equality, freedom and national independence was the basis for success. Some might claim that questioning authority must be accompanied by violent protest, but this is not always the case. Non violence protest and questioning is the best and most powerful way to putforth our demands in front of authority. If the authority does not heed to our demands, we then can opt for a different questioning strategy.
But, there are circumstances, when questioning the authority has negative consequences. For example, in case of a terrorist attack, the government must take quick and wise decisions and settle situations as soon possible to avoid further damage. To sum up, questioning the authority is required to achieve well being of society as long as it does hinders the growth or cause segregation.
- 1) The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and sup 58
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.164682539683 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0674603174603 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357142857143 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0575396825397 0.0444667217837 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119047619048 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0496031746032 0.0406280797675 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10945404848 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218253968254 0.030933414821 71% => OK
Particles: 0.00198412698413 0.0016655270985 119% => OK
Determiners: 0.093253968254 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0257936507937 0.0249443105267 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0148568991511 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2819.0 2732.02544248 103% => OK
No of words: 452.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23672566372 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380530973451 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.325221238938 0.280924506359 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243362831858 0.200843997647 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.16814159292 0.132149295362 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10945404848 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 62.0501838276 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5454545455 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4210390905 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.136363636 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 53.0675784393 51.4728631049 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.62307692308 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419911839233 0.391690518653 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0926978174807 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0558890988117 0.077325440228 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538102061418 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193953338703 0.149214159877 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158973694092 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093921217306 0.0892212321368 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304007223879 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.152546204906 0.0692045440612 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282189642607 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101784185133 0.0653680567796 16% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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