Gaining knowledge is a sequence from the most rudimentary stage till the most unlimited prosperous stage of knowledge. Hence, being a role model of knowledge demands multi tasks like taking risks and keep the mind open for every things new. However, some people prefer the reassurance feeling by knowing the most basic information and do not have the passion to know the thruth faces about any things. On the one hand, my point of view with the people who keen to keep their mind up dated with the most recent science. So, to substantiate my case, this essay will illustrate my opinion to elaborate my preference.
To begin with, the first the foremost point coming to the mind is the concrete meaning of knowledge while its highly subjective but the correct definition is gaining new information is based on group of experiments, "trial and error", hypothesis, theories and sharing information from different culture. By analyzing the definition we get out the first point which is doing experiment will end up with unpredictable result that might be great or miserable. The striking example is the vaccines as a weakened virus were injected in the human body while waiting the results is very risky task that may end up life or on the other hand it might flourish new sciences.
Furthermore, the second vital point should be taken into consideration is without taking risk will not be able to discover the foreseen facts and truths and the world will stay on the merely shape. The vivid example is, our ancestor's and using herbals as a medications for treating different pain such as headache, backache, and even toothache with the same inherited methods. Whereas now people's minds are open for different fields to gain the most accessible science that vitalize our life. The striking example is the endoscopic surgery, it is done without pain, for few minutes and the patients will be able to get out the hospital within few hours after the surgery.
while this is true, about the importance of feeling reassure and calm and far a way from the complex things in this world but that feeling was in the past and now we are a crucial part of this world and if we are not on the right track we will not able to have a place in this world, and unsettling truth will devastated it.
In conclusion, it is important to be reassured and the real assurance is by revealing and being active part of development and to be a strong mark of knowledge, because it has a positive consequence by facilitating the people daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80365296804 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64631471847 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1660601563 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.285714286 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.21951772744 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269512980755 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904482571239 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068639300264 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141553867331 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812216073121 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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