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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone to what extend do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, regarding remarkable changes in the structure of society, private sector has started to take a major role in people’s life. This movement can be observed in two critical fields, education and healthcare, which have been belonged to the governmental sector traditionally and as a result of this new trade people are forced to pay more money to receive such these facilities. So there is a debate about this issue whether private or governmental sector should be responsible for these costs.
As we can see when government have been responsible for education and healthcare in so...
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Sentence: This movement can be observed in two critical fields, education and healthcare, which have been belonged to the governmental sector traditionally and as a result of this new trade people are forced to pay more money to receive such these facilities.
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Sentence: As we can say from our discussion, the privet sector has better access to new technologies so can present higher services.
Error: privet Suggestion: No alternate word
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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