changes from the past have benefited people in modern life in all the ways.
World have witnessed so many changes from the past, leaving behind the stone age million years we are with science and its miracles.We have better life style and resources than our ancestors.People have lot of benefits in modern life in most of the ways, however not in all ways.
Development of brain in human beings have also developed some uncertainties in the life.Restlessness have resulted in the loss of peace of mind. over ambitiousness have made people violent like imps of devil. We can easily get a sincere pet but far difficult to meet sincere human.Expectations have made the humans frustrated.
Although modern life style have weakened the humans mentally it has impact on their health too.Weak immune system and diseases like diabetes,cardiac arrest,etc are some of the adverse affects.Not having proper diet and workout can be considered as a major reason behind the health problems.
Moreover modern technology is at great height but it is also like a threat to our safety and security.People have to think several times before trusting,whether it is a person, audio visual media advertisement or a website.World is full of frauds and thugs.
As all from above we are leading a modern life with all the facilities at our door steps. But uncertainly we have have left some important things in the past which are very difficult to get in this modern world.
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Sentence: But uncertainly we have have left some important things in the past which are very difficult to get in this modern world.
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