The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles * between 2006 and 2009.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
*vehicles that use both fuel and electricity
This chart shows data on the international sale of vehicle which use both fuel and electricity from 2006 to 2009.
The changing number of sales from each regions shows that the using of hybrid vehicles was started by USA and followed by other regions.
In the year 2006, USA was the highest region which used cars which were played by fuel and electric power by 250,000 sales while Japan and others had the same graph by 50,000 sales. In 2007, all of region increased their number of sales. However in the next year, 2008, USA dropped to around 300,000 numbers of sales while Japan and others increase steadily.
In the end of the period, the graph informs an unpredictable situation. The number of sales from Japan increased dramatically and reached more than USA while USA decreased slightly.
In short, the number of sales in USA was fluctuated while Japan and other regions increased year by year.
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Sentence: This chart shows data on the international sale of vehicle which use both fuel and electricity from 2006 to 2009.
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Sentence: The changing number of sales from each regions shows that the using of hybrid vehicles was started by USA and followed by other regions.
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