The charts below show information about the number of fish caught and the number of fishing boats used in Westhaven.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
There were two tables that showed about number of fish caught near Westhaven from 2008 to 2011 and number of fishing boats in Westhaven from 2008 to 2011.
The first table gave information about two species of fishes that caught near Westhaven. There are tuna and swordfish. Tuna fish had increased slightly from around 82 species in 2008 to around 110 species in 2011. However, from 2008 to 2011 the number of swordfishes rose in around 72 to around 95 species between 2008 and 2009. But, between 2009 and 2010 there was a slight decreased of swordfishes around 95 species to 78 species and there was an upward from 2010 to 2011 around 78 to 98 number of swordfishes.
Secondly, according to the tables, the number of fishing boats in Westhaven from 2008 to 2011. There was a general an upward trend between 2008 and 2011 in Westhaven. Total number of boats in operation was almost steady from 2008 to 2010, around 50 to 55 boats. However, from 2010 to 2011, numbers increased extremely from 55 to 70 boats.
Overall, there has been an upward trend in the number of fish caught and the number of fishing boats used in Westhaven. However, the difference between fish caught and fishing boat became much greater.
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