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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. What extent do you agree to this?
Nowadays, life without computers will be very miserable for people as majority of people spend so much time on computers from searching information to watching videos. As computers are being introduced in classrooms, the way of learning has been changed. Students are looking for information from internet, downloading course materials and using sophisticated softwares in their education. However, I doubt this will effect the role of teachers in the classroom.
First of all, computers are used as a tool for students to assist in education which can provide them information they require. Howeve...
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Sentence: To summer up, it is not feasible for students to rely on computers for their development in education and still require human interaction to guide them and help them understand topics.
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