As computers are being used more and more in education there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

Today many education establishment are provided by computers. There are lots of classrooms where lessons pass only by means of Internet of special software but at the same time almost lessons aren’t been able without teacher. As for me, it’s obviously that teachers are necessary for educational process.

Firstly, computer is known to be something like means for receiving and sending information. Even if teacher gives the strict direction what kind of information students must learn nevertheless kids will be required checking. It helps them to realize the knowledge and do their best to g...

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Sentence: Even if teacher give the strict direction what kind of information students must learn then kids are required checking.
Description: The fragment teacher give the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense

Sentence: One of the most not attracted things in using computer it's forming a habit not to remember rules, facts, dates and so on.
Description: The fragment not attracted things is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace attracted with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive

Sentence: There is one funny but a little grif story.
Error: grif Suggestion: grief

Sentence: However if people didn't get in school the basic of learning skills and if they didn't understand what for they study then people unlikely wouldn become convenient and happy.
Error: wouldn Suggestion: would
Error: didn Suggestion: did not (Don't type don't, didn't,couldn't,aren't etc. in essay writing)

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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 329 350
No. of Characters: 1540 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.259 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.681 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.587 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.278 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.51 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.27 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.532 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5