Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?Give reasons for you

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.

What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Submitted by subodh860 on Sat, 01/26/2013 - 01:58

In modern era, the world is driven by technological advancements and globalization. In past few years, world has seen significant changes; socially, economically and culturally. Unfortunately, all the changes have not been beneficial to humankind. Although, there are umpteen challenges each country faces, the nature of every problem varies. The challenges a developed country face and a challenges that a under developed country face are vastly different.

My country, Nepal, is one of the under developed counties which is seeking a political stability and a direction for economic development....

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Sentence: Every year innumerous human resources and talents migrate to developed countries.
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No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.297 4.7
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Sentence Length SD: 6.531 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.498 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
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Hello Sir,

I will be appearing for IELTS GT test this Saturday. Now that you have reviewed many of my essays, please let me know if I would be able to get at least 7 in writing section?
Please suggest more scope for improvement, if any.

Last but not the least, thank you so much for your time on correcting and reviewing my essays.

I await your response.

Thanks,
Subodh

Hi Subodh, You write essays greatly. Your level is around 8.0.

To get the score 7.0 or over, first of all, make sure you write the essay around 350 words or as much as possible. people in GRE writings can put 600 words in 30 minutes while you have 40 minutes. More words means higher marks. This is the hidden rule few people have figured out.

Second, try to focus on one thing and argue with examples in one paragraph. Don't try to talk a lot of things. When you put a lot of things in one paragraph, the Sentence-Sentence Coherence will be low. The good way is following the pattern you used for this essay.

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