The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the graphs illustrating some sample of building in hot as well as cold weather for inhabitants in the world.
It is evident from the information provided that the houses in cool climate intend storing heat inside whereas that of warm weather try to remove all the hot asmosphere outside.
to be more specific, being equipped with high-angled roof oriented to the sun, the building in cool weather have insulation systems alongside the wall to get maximum access to the daylights. In this condition of climate, the process of treating the warmth has only one stage in comparison with 2 stages in cold weather.
regarding building in warm climate, it is the dominant house in terms of the external reflection to the sunlight so as to advoid the accumulation of temperature from the air. One additional stage of this type is to remove the heat at night to make the house cooller.
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Sentence: It is evident from the information provided that the houses in cool climate intend storing heat inside whereas that of warm weather try to remove all the hot asmosphere outside.
Error: asmosphere Suggestion: atmosphere
Sentence: regarding building in warm climate, it is the dominant house in terms of the external reflection to the sunlight so as to advoid the accumulation of temperature from the air.
Error: advoid Suggestion: avoid
Sentence: One additional stage of this type is to remove the heat at night to make the house cooller.
Error: cooller Suggestion: cooler
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