The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams provide an overview of the production of cement from available devices as well as how cement is used to manufacture concrete for construction purpose.
Overall, the cement production involves various stages from the beginning to ultimate product. Likewise, there are a number of prerequisites needed in the making of concrete.
With regard to the first diagram, limestone and clay are initially crushed by a crusher to form powder. Subsequently powder is then mixed prior to be...
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at the last para, why five
at the last para, why five elements? there are four!
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