Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience .
Agree with the following statement that parents are the best teachers for children because they try to learn everything from their parents that help them in their future and also helpful in making their personality. Parents seem to be mirror image of their children , who want to be exactly like that image in their lives.
Behaviour is naturally adapted by the young ones by seeing their surrounding ,the kind of behaviour in which they live at their homes and it depends mostly on parents to teach their child to behave properly or improperly such as if parents are unable to keep their house...
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Sentence: Therefore,the role of parents are indefinite and significant in everybody's lives and they are the milestone who give us way to lead our lives with a respectful manner.Parents are the best guide for children's life and they give their children advice and support in any circumstances present in their lives .
Description: The fragment who give us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Words: 264 350
Sentence Length SD: 18.219 7.5
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 264 350
No. of Characters: 1301 1500
No. of Different Words: 137 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.928 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.512 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 37.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.219 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.454 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.841 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.176 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5