The table and graph below give information about the gross domestic product (GDP) and employment sectors of a developing country.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevent.
write at least 150 words.
The Table shows the percentage distribution in different sectors of employment and GDP in 2007. Though, the graph shows the percentage distribution in different sectors of GDP till 2010.
From the table, natural resources accounts for 77.4% in employment and 19.2% in GDP while industry acccounts for 3.6% in employment and 15.4% in GDP.
Service like trade, resaurants, hotels contributes 4.9% in employment and 37.1% in GDP. For transport, communication in service sector accounts for 1.6% in employment and 8.4% in GDP. Goverment sector contributes 8.7% in employment and 12.5% in GDP.
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Sentence: From the table, natural resources accounts for 77.4 in employment and 19.2 in GDP while industry acccounts for 3.6 in employment and 15.4 in GDP.
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Suggestion: Refer to resources and accounts
Sentence: From the table, natural resources accounts for 77.4 in employment and 19.2 in GDP while industry acccounts for 3.6 in employment and 15.4 in GDP.
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Sentence: Service like trade, resaurants, hotels contributes 4.9 in employment and 37.1 in GDP.
Error: resaurants Suggestion: restaurants
Sentence: In conlusion, gross domestic product sectoral distributing was significantly less than employment sectoral distribution in a developing country in 2007.
Error: sectoral Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: conlusion Suggestion: conclusion
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