Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Solving environmental problems should be the responsibilities of one international organization instead of state or national governments.
Environmental problems have been one of the major international and national issue in these recent decades. There are several associations working to solve these troubles. Some people say that solving an environmental problem should be responsibility of one global governing body instead of internal governments, and I totally agree with this statement.
World organizations can do better to solve environmental problems because they are the one who collaborate with all nations through which they may develop the best possible worldwide. They are not effected by poltical situations whereas national governments are directly effected.They understand the global situation and think globally, and collect data and information from all over the world to find out the better solutions. There are many poor or underdeveloped countries which may not be able to arrange a sufficient budget to fix their problems. But the international organizations may easily sort out these problems because they have the funds collected from many wealthy countries and will facilitate planning and implementation.
On the other hand, some people may believe that a state should be responsible for solving environmental problems. Firstly, they understand their own national environmental problems. Secondly, they know how the problems are created, know their people better and the way to involve them in finding solutions. Moreover, they head the education of the country which will result in easy access to the people. Besides this, some time international organizations may not understand the local issues which may change the direction of future plans.
With all this taken into account, I believe, if the host country will support and state their difficulties to world organizations and will collaborate, then it will assist to solve problems. Global systems have been always neutral in their work and everyone believes in them which may help for fruitful results.
Sentence: Moreover, they head the education of the country which will result in easy access to the people.
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Sentence: They are not effected by poltical situations whereas national governments are directly effected.They understand the global situation and think globally, and collect data and information from all over the world to find out the better solutions.
Error: poltical Suggestion: political
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